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Thursday, 2 September 2021

Star Poem W6

Hi guys this week for writing we are taking a break from writing our speeches and doing poems instead. In our first workshop we were getting ideas on what we would write our poems about and also the theme. my first option was to do a rhyming poem on the colour yellow but mid way through writing the poem I didn't really know if it was going to make sense so I google some ideas and now my new poem is about stars. (it's also a rhyming one btw) Here is a photo of my poem, I added the poem down below if it's too hard to read through the picture!


poem: Star light, star bright, star shining in the night, the twinkling stars above us all, very bright so tiny and small, the ones we wish upon every night, are very far in sight, but one day when the time will come, our wishes will become undone.

Thanks for reading my blog! Have an awesome day.
Question: What type of poem is your favorite?


2 comments:

  1. Hey Soph,

    I liked how you've documented your journey to writing this awesome poem, goes to show you don't have to stick with the first idea especially if you aren't happy with how it's turning out. Your poem is awesome, you've chosen great vocab and a nice use of rhyme.
    My favourite type of poem would have to be a Haiku!

    Keep up the fantastic work :)

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    1. Thanks Miss Parker! Did you know that the Haiku poem is traditionally a Japanese poem :O

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