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Wednesday, 15 April 2020

Writing: Fixing a paragraph of my report

Hi Guys and welcome back to my blog! Today for writing we had to get a paragraph of our writing report and fix it up using a thesauruses and/or a dictionary! I will show you the original, my version and the final edited one. Here they are

 Thank you for reading I hope you could see the difference of them!
Question: Did you use a thesaurus a dictionary or both when you edited your piece?

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