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Thursday, 13 February 2020

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Hi and welcome to my Blog! My name is Sophie Davis and I am 11 years old. I have two fish called Spot and Fred and 1 sister her name is Emily.  I am a year seven at St Francis . My Hobbies are Gymnastics, Hockey, Surf life saving and Reading. In the Holidays I went on a really cool and fun 4 day bike ride trail in the West Coast, We started at Greymouth and ended up in Ross. It was a great family bonding time and nice to get off our devices and do something different for once. This year at school I am really looking for to the School Fair on March 8 and being in the year 7/8 hub makes me feel like a leader. My hopes for the year are getting better at Maths and being a leader.


5 comments:

  1. Hey Sophie,
    I like the way you said about yourself! I also like how you added a photo of the first day of school as links with your blog. Maybe next time you could make your blog a tiny bit longer but that's just my opinion.
    Keep up the good work, -Megan

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    1. Thank you Megan for that very good advice. I will try to make my blogs longer in my next ones.
      - Sophie

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  2. hey Sophie,
    I like how you explained what you like and what you did in the holidays, I like biking to. Maybe next time you could make it a little bit longer but that's just what i think. -Kate

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  3. Thank you Kate I will try make my blogs longer next time. It's Great that you like biking.
    - Sophie

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  4. Hi Sophie. I love your blog about your holidays and your hopes for this year. Maybe next time you could talk about a goal you have for this year.
    - Beth 😁

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